Published October 30, 2009
Insomnia City: A Love Story
By Tariq Muhammad
We walk through the galleria
Watch the beautiful sights
Of the Giant Skyscrapers
And marvelous lights
On the farm the sunsets
In the surburbs it leaps
But here in the city
The sun never sleeps
I love the city
But I like the World
For she is my Lady
And Insomnia's my girl
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Short, sweet, simple.
But, I'm a stickler. Beautiful and skyscrapers are spelled wrong. There should also be some punctuation, here: On the farm, the sun sets. In the suburbs, it leaps.
i love the poem, its deep.